Research and Planning 17/20 (A) Production 38/60 (C)
You have completed detailed research and planning for your magazine.
Your production shows a sound understanding of the conventions of music magazines. To improve further consider using a bigger masthead on your front cover, and adding more coverlines especially at the bottom of the page. On the contents page consider using captions for the pictures. The image of the front cover looks stretched. Fill in the space in the bottom left of the page. Try to use a wider variety of colour and font on the double page spread. You may want to make the layout of the double page spread more conventional, either by putting the text into columns or making the individual boxes more clearly defined (e.g. through the use of colour).
Research and Planning 17/20 (A)
ReplyDeleteProduction 38/60 (C)
You have completed detailed research and planning for your magazine.
Your production shows a sound understanding of the conventions of music magazines. To improve further consider using a bigger masthead on your front cover, and adding more coverlines especially at the bottom of the page. On the contents page consider using captions for the pictures. The image of the front cover looks stretched. Fill in the space in the bottom left of the page. Try to use a wider variety of colour and font on the double page spread. You may want to make the layout of the double page spread more conventional, either by putting the text into columns or making the individual boxes more clearly defined (e.g. through the use of colour).